Premature.

I finally posted some writing, it would seem!
Although after a good sleep and a reread, I feel I posted it prematurely.

It tapers. Not with style so much as with content. By the end of the chapter the paragraphs are shortened, I'm trying to fit too much into so little space. Really I think I could have gotten away with posting only the first section, which is pretty solid, but it didn't leave much for development of characters.

Blegh. Live and learn, I suppose.